Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments
You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
This is a simple but informative chart, which explicitly demonstrate the purpose of students’ touring in a certain university. As is shown by the chart, 37% of students tour for the purpose of sightseeing; next comes the purpose of relieving pressure, accounting for 33%; only a small part of students tour for the purpose of making friends and cultivating independence.
It is nothing worth blame that college students spend time and money traveling for the purpose of enjoying natural beauty and relaxing themselves. Anyway, they are young and energetic, and therefore at the best time of going out and seeing the world. However, having fun should not be the main purpose of touring for the young. In order to ensure that they have sound development in the future, it is essential that they make a point of traveling for the purpose of making friends with a wide range of people and fostering their spirit of independence.
To achieve this aim, college students may well change their way of traveling. For instance, they can well tour by bus or by bike, and during their tour they can try to communicate with local people as much as possible, with an aim to learn about different ways of living and broaden their horizon.